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Diaries

A diary entry Success Criteria:

- first person

- paragraphs

- capital letters

- correct punctuation 

- personal details

- past tense 

- pictures

 

Guardians Of The Galaxy (2014) - Opening Credits Scene - Starlord Dance

The person in this video is called Peter Quill aka Star Lord. Write a diary entry from his point of view on what happened to him in the video. Remember to include all features on the success criteria. Perhaps you could write it in the style of 'Diary of a Wimpy Kid' or 'Dork Diaries' by adding pictures to your work. 

An example of what your diary entry might look like is below:

 

Thursday 21st February 2014

Dear Diary, 

Today was totally out of this world! Literally! I managed to find out where the Power Stone is kept and let me tell you, the security there is non-existent. Flying down to Morag, I realised it was completely abandoned...

 

But remember to plan your work first! 

Maybe create a mind-map of all of the ideas that you might like to include in your diary entry. 

Then, when you start writing your diary entry, you'll have lots of amazing ideas to choose from. 

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